Bitlets are about quantity, not quality. Free-write at least one a day about what is on your mind, going on around you, or the state of your life. Ignore the urge to edit; it's not about being profound on purpose, it's about stumbling on it by accident.About this Bitlet
Not much to say about this one, though there is a lot to say, I just can't put the the words into text and have them still contain meaning. So, this is just grandfather-grandson talks. I just notice the details and write about them later. Though there was guitar playing involved. I do WANT feedback on this piece though. I am writing a similar poem and I could definitely use feedback from this to put towards the other poem.Browse Bitlets
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